I have considered this from several perspectives in my own way, and I have come to the conclusion that your final image is the most appropriate. Therefore, I agree with your design.
First of all, I think it concisely captures the core features of “Torana”, especially given the argument made by some that most of such symbols in East Asia originated from it.
Also, when I first encountered “Torana”, I felt that it would be highly suitable for representing a ceremonial gate, not only because of its Asian roots but also because similar structures can be found across various cultures around the world.
Of course, it would be difficult for any ‘symbol’ to be completely deculturalized from all cultural sentiments. Thus, to people from certain cultures, it might feel a bit unfamiliar as a representation of a ceremonial gate.
However, while the symbolic image you created clearly exhibits the characteristics of a ceremonial gate, it does not seem to represent any specific culture in particular.
What caught my attention the most is that while human-centered structures often favor a wider base and a narrower top to emphasize stability, structures representing the divine or sacred world frequently take a form that is narrower at the bottom and wider at the top, or soaring upward. I believe your symbolic image captures this perfectly.
A great example of this is Japan’s Torii[鳥居]. Even in other East Asian architectural traditions, structures built for sacred spaces often pile up the part underneath the roof—referred to as “공포”[gongpo;장부맞춤] in Korean, “斗拱”[dǒugǒng] in Chinese, and “組物”[Kumimono] in Japanese—as high as possible to add a sense of mystique, and I believe your image beautifully and symbolically expresses this very concept.
In particular, the number ‘3’ is a number frequently invoked across various cultures worldwide to convey a sense of vigilance or to signify and embody sacred meanings.
As it carries sufficient symbolic meaning without being biased toward any specific cultural background, I believe the proposed icon is just right to be used as the icon representing this feature.